Approaching the stop, we get up
And lurch to the front of the bus.
Alighting, we part,
I wave through the dark,
And cannon the pole with a clang!
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frenchguy
- 05/06/2009 @ 04:33:30
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Miblo
- http://miblodelcarpio.blog.co.uk
- 05/06/2009 @ 13:31:39
Oh, thank you very much, frenchguy!
This is actually a limerick, or at least it's supposed to be. Limericks should be funny (and obscene) but this one only seems to fit the bill in terms of its metre and rhyme scheme (although this latter is intentionally screwed by the last line). -
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Hey, I really like it. It sounds a bit like a Chinese Haiku. I really like your blog, it's just different.
Take good care.